Preety nice!
How come you didnt used darker tones? Same as in Perfect Love's original sketch.
The left hand looks a bit thin at a moment. Rest than that the upper body looks good.
The tail could use some refining. It has some bumbs (ex: the buttocks zone, and knee's). It would look sexy'er and better imo with more rounded and smoother lines.
The background/sky could use a bit more work.

Thanks Stefan for taking time out to write the comment. Fully appreciate it Lets see if I can redo a better version... gonna take some time though

I agree with Stefan here, this has potential, but could be more refined (no square legs etc., and some lines should be less, while others should be more defined. The hair looks very nice.

Keep on drawing

Hi Marisa...
Very nice perspective and composition.
The sky could use more work.
Carlos

Nice character, some stuff are really mentioned. Keep working!

Thank you Vincent, Carlos, and Matias Will be working on it

This is really nice. Like her pose!
You can improve a lot by simply crop some of the background
and create more lineweight. More fad lines at shadow areas
and at the border between her and the the rock. Yeah, keep
on drawing!

Thanks for viewing and commenting on my work Stefan Really good crit.. Will try and follow up on it.

This is beautiful! I like the shy pose. the large pencil strokes look really great!